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Do you have advice for a hopeless teen? but i doubt you could top mine...
i moved recently i have no friends because im really emotional and my friends don't want to deal with a sensitive pussy... ive like my best friend and she knew. but she said to stop texting her for ever and shes changing her number because i wont shut the **** up, she also says she kinda liked me but im not man enough for her. i went threw depression and suicidal thoughts, cops came, got my phone taken away, because they don't want me hurting myself, im really shy, but i wear prep cloths and i really want a girl friend and a kiss, because ive had neither, and im 16 junior and realizing life isn't what i thought it was and everyone smokes weed here, and drinks and have a lot of sex. i have nothing to do and i have all senior classes, and im a junior, no-one cares about me, even though im a really good guy. and im not ugly, im actually really attractive so ive been told, and im not trying to be Cauchy just wanting to talk my emotions out... any one got any advice either would be great... | don't think that no one cares about you.
i care about you.
i don't even know who you are and i care about you.
guys who can talk their emotions out are amazing in my opinion.
find the right girl for you.
it takes time.
i'm still searching too.
you're not alone. | What impression does this excerpt give? I want to know what impression my character gives you. I don't want "beta" reading, it needs editing, and I know that, I will get that sorted. The main questions are: What impression does my character give you? What do you think of him? What do you think his personality is like? Does he seem up himself, or arrogant, in any way (I want him to seem arrogant) ?
Excerpts:
He walked further into the flat five minutes later. Sitting on a red sofa in his living room watching the 5’o'clock news, he sipped on a cup of peppermint tea. He picked up the remote and turned it off; the speakers had blown a few weeks ago, so there was no sound anyway.
He took another loud sip and put the cup down. His house was immaculate, perfect. He sighed and got up, glancing back at his sofa and placing a blue cushion in the middle. He stared at the cushion for a few moments before walking away, back out into the hallway, and scooped up a book that fell off the shelving unit a few minutes before.
He organised everything, everything had to be perfect, even his choice in women. He examined the shelf, searching for the letter “T” and slotted the book into the shelves. He took a step back and looked at it once more before strolling into his room.
“What shall I wear, today?” He breathed. He opened his wardrobe and instantly decided, picking out light blue jeans and a yellow and white striped shirt. A few minutes later he left his room and walked into the kitchen, tapping all the while.
2nd (he's in a park, it was described earlier).
They thought no one could see them, the branches hung low and the leaves hid them somewhat, but they were still visible. He shook his head as an old man walked past him, limping on his left side quite heavily.
One of the branches near the teenagers, that were fumbling about, snapped, exposing them. John got up and walked towards the man, he said.
“Do you want any help?””
The old man stopped and glanced to his left, no one was there. He glanced to his right and saw John’s smiling face, the dark look replaced by one of kindness. The man could have sworn the sound had come from the left of him. He narrowed his eyes and limped away.
John sighed. No one trusts anyone nowadays, he thought. He glanced over his shoulder, at the tree, and smiled, the teenage boy was now trying to lift the branch. Weakling, he thought.
He strode towards them and smiled. He leant down and picked up the branch, it never left the ground, but it was considerably higher than the boy. He passed the end he held to the boy, the boy took it, and went to spit on John. He stood five feet away, too far for the boy to spit, and said.
“No.”
The boy slowly lowered the branch, grunting the whole time, and spat.
“**** off, pussy-hole!”
John glared at the boy and the boy turned to the girl, probably his girlfriend, and she frowned and walked away from him. Past John, she brushed against him and walked down the hill, and out of sight.
John smiled and turned away slowly. The boy stood, speechless, and John could feel the boy’s eyes boring into his black and grey jacket. He stopped a few metres away and sighed. Winter was near, and he hated winter with a burning passion.
NOTE: If it's too long, don't bother answering, it really doesn't help when people say that.
I know most of the people on at this time will be American, so I'll just say it, some spelling on here may not match yours. They're the way the English spell them (Example: Organised). Also, the teens in one of the excerpts, that's how English guys, in London, are nowadays. John is around twenty-five. | He seems sorta arrogant.... To me, he gives off the impression that you're trying to pull off.
My first impression of him is that he's kinda full of himself, but at the same time he is not.
Hmm... I like it. | Im going to kill myself someone help me plz? im a worthless miserable piece of ****. im a drug addict looser. my family is done with me and i dont really talk to anyone anymore because im so embarrased with myself and how i turned out. i dont hang out with anyone. **** i dont do anything. im 21 years old and i have nothing. no car. no hs diploma or ged. no job. im probly bi polar or whatever. i talk to myself. im weird as ****. i havent been happy for a long time. i come from a ok family i guess. most people in my family seem like they have it together. idk i guess i did to many drugs or something. idk man i have no confidence in myself. i just hate life and i think im going to do it. ya i want to die so ******* bad but im to much of a pussy to kill myself. but i think eventually i will find the nerve to do it. so im asking for help because i feel like i cant talk to anyone in my family cuz ive been putting them through so much that i dont even want to ask for help. im a looser dude i have no money so can anyone suggest a place i could call that takes people in like me for free. i mean a place that would seriously help me. im from houston texas. so somewhere close plz. and dont ****** recomend rehab ive been there more then i can count on my hands and feet. all those people want is ****** money ****** fake *** mother *******. dont say teen challenge either there criminals using god to make money. hah by the way there isnt a god. | This is the only number that I can find where they say they help homeless drug addicts with housing and the help they need. I don't know them or what they do. 1866 762 3712
Here is a resource for you also streetsoccerusa.org that helps the homeless etc
You can always get your GED.
You need help, so lose the attitude you have, because you have caused yourself all this harm, and now you need others to help you. Many people told you not to take drugs and how to make a life for yourself, YOu are the one who messed it up. So you have no right to be angry with others. Appreciate the help you get, now get determined to make something out of your life and find your life purpose, and lose the attitude. Get going.
Show some genuine appreciation.
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eftuniverse.com click on 'get started free' | What is the best martial art for self defense? I am steaming right now.I really want to know how to defend myself.Heres why.I was at the mall 2 weeks ago.I saw a big black guy flirting with some oriental girl.Even though she rejected him, he continued to harass her.Her friend, who was black told him to back off that she was not interested.He called her black *****, and told her to shut the **** up and stay out of it.She slapped him.He shoved her.I was outraged so i came up grabbed him by his shirt and said "What do you think you're doing bum *** country *****?Get on your knees right now and apologize to these beautiful young ladies.".He hit me straight in my face as i fell flat on my back.I was dazed and didn't know what was going on.I heard him shouting "get up lil *****".I got up stumbling.I tried hitting him in his face, but he caught my fist and hit me in my stomach.All my air was knocked out of me.I fell to the ground and stayed down.He laughed calling me pussy.As he walked away mumbling "Black *****,Pussy *** *****, and chink mother ******".The girls rushed to me asking if i was okay.I responded i was fine even though i was aching,angry,and dazed.I now talk to them regularly.I never saw that asshole again.I wish i could have reported him.No one did a thing when he was harassing the oriental girl or when we started fighting.They just stood there watching while i got beaten to the floor.People are such cowards now a days...I feel like i'm one of the only real men left...And i'm only 14.After that experience i want to learn how to defend myself.What is the best marital art for self defense?Make sure that young teens can learn the martial art too...I heard it's krav maga.But i also heard there are many fake krav maga schools in U.S.The one i would go to would be this club.Here's the link www.ohiokravmaga.com/.I also heard ninjustu is good.But i'm not old enough to join the club i heard was decent.Here's the link to that club. www.columbusninjutsuclub.com/
So what do you recommend?I thank you in advance. | Your rage and frustration is understandable but remember what you did was foolish. Rushing blindly into something, albeit chivalrous to the ladies, can backfire on you. For all your troubles, you were only knocked down with a punch this time. Next time it could be something worse like a knife or gun. You can't always be a hero and you're not properly equipped in size or skill at this point. You need to use your brain first, assess the situation before making a move. What you should have done is verbally shout out loud to at least get him to back off. Alert security or police using your cell phone or even snap a picture as some people have done nowadays.
Secondly learning a martial art for this reason and this reason alone is just going to try your patience even more. You will get even more frustrated when the learning process takes too long. Then even more frustrated when you try what you learn outside and it doesn't work because you're still a novice at it. This isn't the correct mindset you want to have delving into a martial art. Free your mind first and let the process happen. Despite what you think, learning a martial art isn't a quick fix or a band-aid solution. It's a build up. A gradual process. At the same time you gain more skill, it will help improve your focus and confidence so that the next time something were to happen, you are cool calm and collect. You can defuse it without fuss and if push comes to shove, you then have the necessarily skills to defend yourself and others. |
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